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Liek, stop Liekking
In knowledge of liek Jeremy Teoh, by Joseph Lee
Monday, July 9, 2007
Poem i have made which i shall share cuz it was liek commented by jeremy teoh.
Relationships acrostic poem
Relationships are sometimes very complicated,
Especially in relationships where seeds of love between two were planted.
Love can make people do weird things so their feelings could be expressed,
As weird as though the sun has risen from the west.
To some, darkness is like troubles, pounding,
In the midst of it, there is love like a bright light shining.
Only few, unfortunately, perceive true love the way it is,
Not many see that love is more than just a ‘swoosh’ down the love boat seeing the silvery scales of fishes,
Selfless, patient, kind, gentle, forgiving, persevering,
Have the world lost the true meaning of love? I was wondering.
Is it true that divorce cases are rising because people think love is all about kissing?
Perception of love is sometimes very important,
So important, without it, true love in relationships is absent.
This poem is an apt description of human relationships and the theme of love is highly evident in the entire poem. Similes and metaphors used, such as "As weird as though the sun has risen from the west." and "In the midst of it, there is love like a bright light shining" also evoke powerful imagery in the mind of the reader. Though poetic devices such as alliteration and onomatopoeia can be used more frequently, all in all this poem is a well-written one.
-Jeremy Teoh
This is juz draft. e final 1 i did not type it out cuz i dun hav it now. e other 2 poems i made were super n i'll type it out when i get it back frm mrs selvan
Joseph
2:32 AM
liek, hi. you are Joseph Lee.
You are in RI
You were from Rosyth
You are frens with jeremy teoh(1Q) n u learnt a new word from him.
That word is liek.
Suddenly, both of you become so obsessed with the word
There was incessant chatter.(guess hu usually say tt)
You guys were so obsessed u decided to blog about it.
Worse still, you guys created a blog about it.
Why? I dunno.
All I know was that you asked Jeremy "Liek, stop liekking".
Somehow, you guys were crazy and created the blog url as liekstopliekking
So that was how you got tis blog.
All becuz of a word....
LIEK!